The chart Below gives information about how families in one county spent their weekly income in 1968 and 2018.
A glance at the bar diagram above presents the average amount of how families expended their weekly earnings in 1968 and 2018. There are 8 categories shown on the chart,
such
as food
, housing, fuel and power, clothing and footwear, household goods, personal goods, transport and leisure.
According to
the data, it is captured that in 1968, people tended to use their money on food
, housing, clothing and footwear. Moreover
, food
hit the highest percentage at 35%. Subsequently
, followed by housing and clothing-footwear at 10%. However
, households have decreased their consumption of food
for 5 decades. Likewise
, clothing and footwear went down by about a half became 5%.
On the other hand
, by 2018, families looked more interested in using their wages for leisure, which was at 22%. It was the biggest point in that year, which outweighed food
and housing as well.
To conclude
, it appears that people
consumption changed dramatically from Change noun form
people's
food
-minded became leisure-minded over decades
.Correct article usage
the decades
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