The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

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The pie chart shows the global jungle in 5 different continents

such

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as South America,

Africa

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, Asia, Europe and

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North America. And the second pie chart despite the percentage of

wood

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in each region.

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Africa

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has the highest number of forests but the

wood

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is lower than any other region. First of all,

Africa

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has the largest percentage of forest about 27% but the amount of timber is one of the lowest at 9%. Followed by North America has the second highest number of trees is 25%, and the amount of

wood

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this

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region is about 30% is a significant amount of

wood

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. Afterwards, Europe has the third largest timberland 18% and 20% of timber.

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, the second largest

wood

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get from South

Africa

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is 23% but the forest is only about 16 percentages. And at least the number of trees and the somehow similar quantity of

wood

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get from trees in Asia is about 14% and 18% respectively.

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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

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Many people argue that eating junk food has led to an unhealthy lifestyle. This problem has become more common among young people these days. Do you agree or disagree that junk food is the cause of the issue?

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