The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.
the pie charts
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in South
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america
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africa
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Africa
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,Asia,Europe and North America ,and the second chart shows
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amount
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lot
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places
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,
overall
,it can be seen that Africa has
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forest
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lowest woods , regards to the
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jungals
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jungles
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, the land of Africa has covered by
forest
by %27 ,but at the same time there is a
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timber
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to other
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countries
contries
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countries
which is just %9 ,
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furthermore
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furthermore
North
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America
Amrica
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America
is the second one to have a great
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by %25 .
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America
amrica
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Asia they hav
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obtained
ed
forest
just below %20 , refers to the
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America
Amrica
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staying
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bg number of trees which is %30
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nd region is Sout
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America
Amri
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at has %23
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