The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

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provided

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percentage

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of world

forest

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in South

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america

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africa

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,Asia,Europe and North America ,and the second chart shows

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amount

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overall

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,it can be seen that Africa has

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forest

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, there is

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lowest woods , regards to the

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jungals

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, the land of Africa has covered by

forest

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by %27 ,but at the same time there is a

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to other

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countries

contries

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countries

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furthermore

North

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America

Amrica

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is the second one to have a great

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amount

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forest

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by %25 .

however

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, Sout

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America

amrica

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, Europa

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Asia they hav

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obtained

forest

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just below %20 , refers to the

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of timber ,Nort

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America

Amrica

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bg number of trees which is %30

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nd region is Sout

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at has %23

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of wood .others

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as Europe and Asia they have slightly below %25 of wood .

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, forest, amrica with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

168 words

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