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,Asia,Europe and North America ,and the second chart shows

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as Europe and Asia they have slightly below %25 of wood .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, forest, amrica with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.

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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

Some parents think television programmes are good for a child’s development. Some parents disagree. What is your opinion?

In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vechiles outweigh the disadvantages?

It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports or musician. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

IT IS COMMONLY BELIEVE THAT NOWADAYS MAIN FACTOR THAT AFFECT A CHILD’S DEVELOPMENT ARE MEDIA,POP CULTURE AND FRIENDS.A DIFFERENT POINT OF VIEW IS THAT FAMILY PLAYS THE MOST SIGNIFICANT ROLE.DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION