The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The first chart
illustrate
Change the verb form
illustrates
the
information about how many Japanese have had Correct article usage
apply
burning
desire Correct article usage
a burning
for travelling
overseas over a period of 10 years from 1985 to 1995.the second line graph highlighted the number of Japanese Change preposition
to travel
which
would prefer aurorally as their destination. all in Correct pronoun usage
who
all
what deduce from Add a comma
all,
first
chart is that Japan's population as time goes have more intention to Change the article
the first
tripe
Correct your spelling
trip
exotic
countries and Change preposition
to exotic
this
desire is on the sore trend. Linking Words
On the other hand
, Australia Linking Words
have
become more prevalent among these people and Change the verb form
has
have
witnessed an incremental trend in Correct subject-verb agreement
has
given
period of time.
If we catch a glimpse Add an article
a given
to
Change preposition
of
above
graph, we can be informed that from 1985 to 1990 jalopies tourists travelling aboard have seen a strikingly sore so that stepped up from 5 Add an article
the above
million
to around 11 Use synonyms
million
. in accordance with Use synonyms
this
trend Linking Words
the
Australia's share Correct article usage
apply
from
Change preposition
of
this
number Linking Words
have
rocketed from 2 Correct subject-verb agreement
has
million
in 1985 to 5 Use synonyms
million
in 1989.to the respect given chart, in 1991 Use synonyms
Linking Words
this
statistics have in fronted by a Change the determiner
these
slightly
decrease with 10 Change the adverb
slight
million
. Use synonyms
Comparatively
a dramatic but provisional drop accrue in second figures in 1989 with 4 Add a comma
Comparatively,
million
.
After 1991 the number of passengers Use synonyms
which
journey to exotic Correct pronoun usage
who
country come
across temperately Wrong verb form
countries
rise
and in 1995 Wrong verb form
rose
reach
a climax Wrong verb form
reached
an
Correct your spelling
and
touch
a peak with 15 Replace the word
touched
million
Use synonyms
.on
Correct your spelling
On
other
end of Correct article usage
the other
spectrum
, the jalopies visitors from Australia Add an article
the spectrum
have
encountered Correct subject-verb agreement
has
with
a substantial surge from just over 4 Change preposition
apply
million
to above 6 Use synonyms
million
between 1989 and 1994 and Use synonyms
finally
there is a fairly decline to 6 Linking Words
million
in 1995.Use synonyms
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