Modern technology has greatly changed how we work and is of benefit to all societies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The contemporary

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Contemporary

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state-of-the-art technological tools have revolutionised the way companies

are operating

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operate

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which has many positive outcomes

on

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for

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men and women across the world. I completely support

this

viewpoint because a great number of individuals in the world are working from home,

enhance

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enhancing

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their life satisfaction more than ever before. The major change that technology has brought is that people

could

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can

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work outside their office cubicles

due to

the

internet

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Internet

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.

As well as

this

, people can collaborate and work with their peers using

cyberbased

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cyber-based

cyber based

tools. Take an example of covid crisis, many companies adapted to

this

change and

make

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their employees

to

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apply

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work remotely in order to maintain social distancing; softwares,

such

as

zoom

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Zoom

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and

google meet

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Google Meet

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, were expansively used for regular meetings and

also

for team collaboration.

This

development has benefited our people in various ways.

In addition

to reclaiming a precious period of daily commute, working

at

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a

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the

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comfort of home is greatly assisting workers to spend less money to travel to workplaces.

This

, in

turn

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helps

individual

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an individual

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to experience a better quality of quality because of

higher

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a higher

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sense of

self-fulfillment

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self-fulfilment

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, caused by having more time and money to spend on their recreational and social needs. Given the fact that the

internet

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Internet

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is available at relatively affordable prices in each country, I believe that

this

trend is prevalent in

evey

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every

society. In conclusion, I completely agree that

the

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apply

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science has revolutionized the way businesses operate across the world as

evident

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evidenced

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by the latest trend of work-from-home which preserves a consideration exertion and an

essenial

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essential

span of professionals. The

advatages

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advantages

are

ominpresent

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omnipresent

because of the widespread accessibility of the

electronics

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electronic

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network.