The charts below show changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one conutry between 1920 and 2019.
The charts illustrate the percentage of domestic residents with
electrorical
uses and Correct your spelling
electrical
its
number of Change the word
the
hours
spent per Use synonyms
week
from 1920 to 2019. Washing Use synonyms
Machine
, Fix the agreement mistake
Machines
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refrigerator
and Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
vaccum
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vacuum
cleaner
are some of the machinery appliances used in Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
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a household
the household
household
.
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households
Overall
, the usage of electrical appliances in Linking Words
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household
depicts a significant rise between 1920 and 2019 especially for Fix the agreement mistake
households
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refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
. Meanwhile, the amount of time Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
used
Verb problem
spent
in
housework per Change preposition
on
week
per Use synonyms
household
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had
declined vividly from 1920 to 2019. The contrast data showed between 2 charts.
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apply
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Refrigerator
started as the least utilized product in 1920 Fix the agreement mistake
Refrigerators
while
vacuum Linking Words
cleaner
and washing Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
machine
were nearly Fix the agreement mistake
machines
in
the same starting point with only Change preposition
at
10
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a 10
percent
difference by 1920. Change the spelling
per cent
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Refrigerator
reached the top used electrical appliances in Fix the agreement mistake
Refrigerators
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household
in 2019 with 100 percent even though Fix the agreement mistake
households
it
started Correct pronoun usage
they
in
the bottom list. Vacuum Change preposition
at
cleaner
followed Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
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refrigerator
as the most used items in 2000 by 100 Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
percentage
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per cent
appliance
. Washing Fix the agreement mistake
appliances
machine
experienced slight changes from 1920 to 2019 and positioned Fix the agreement mistake
machines
in
75 percent usage in 2019.
Change preposition
at
Numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
Number
hours
of housework had slumped between 1920 and 2019. In 1920 it was stated that 50 Use synonyms
hours
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spent
per Add a missing verb
were spent
week
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while
in 2019 only 10 Linking Words
hours
per Use synonyms
week
per Use synonyms
household
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words hours, week, refrigerator, household with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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