There should be strict laws banning people from taking photographs of people under 18 in order to protect young celebrities and the children of celebrities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is stated that strict laws should be implemented

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whom

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when

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taking

picture

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pictures

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of people under eighteen

due

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to protect entertainers'

children

or young

artists

.

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essay will provide

to

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some

point

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i

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agree or disagree with

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notion. First of all, young public figures

are

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not consent and inadequately

realized

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their situation facing

the

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fame so it is

imposibble

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impossible

for them to experience and endure the massive exposure from

media

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. Strict laws are necessary to prevent uncivilized or unprotected photographs that can be

exploitated

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exploited

by

public

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from taking underage

celebrities

.

For example

, one cute little photo of public figures'

kids

can be spread online and used as a fetish tool for pedophils which can increase their sexual desire for underage

artists

.

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issue is strongly sensitive

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forced the stakeholders to take action

upon

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its prevention.

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,

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celebrities'

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and celebrities'

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safety

are in

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a risk if apply condition is continued.

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, some creepy human being will

abducted

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them and

using

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them as a threat weapon for their parents who are famous

artists

.

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situation will make the professional job like

artists

did

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not get

their

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enough insurance from society. Meanwhile, some entertainers are

willingly

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to share their

kids

' private lives and

considerate

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it as a part of their

family

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consequences. The issue of random folks taking their

children

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children's

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pictures is not that frightening for them.

In addition

, they did not voluntarily need a strict law

from

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banning

public

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the public

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to give

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their family exposure. In

this

situation, adding specific rules for randomly taking photos of young

celebrities

or entertainers is not necessary because adults are already giving their

permition

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permission

.

To sum up

, providing tight rules for preventing human

being

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beings

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take

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from taking

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pictures of young

artists

or

celebrities

'

children

is necessary for protecting

kids

from public exploitation and to ensure their security. It is okay to not

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strict laws for it as long as their parents are

willingly

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expose

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their

kids

.