Demand for gas and oil is increasing and so finding new sources in remote and untouched areas is a necessity. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In these

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days,

the

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fossil

fuels

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fuel

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demand has

been

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increased

to

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around the world

due to

increasing the population.

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, some claim that new

energy

resources will

find

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in remote and untouched

places

in behalf

increasing

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of increasing

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demand.

This

trend has benefits and drawbacks. I think

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tendency has more advantages than

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. In

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essay, I will discuss it briefly for the following reasons. There are some perks of finding fossil fuel in remote

places

. The main advantage is that many

people

will get more employment opportunities

such

as mining workers, engineers and drivers when

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new

energy

from

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untouched locations, and

as a result

,

people

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livelihood might be improvised.

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in

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Saudi Arabia is the richest country among the

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Gulf

countries because

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of

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it has more fossil

fuels

and they are

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supplies

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supplied

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oils to many nations in order

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to

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their citizens

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many jobs

from

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it

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. Another merit is that it provides more environmental perks. To be more elaborate, new

energy

sources might not release greenhouse gas and

foot print

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, and

as a result

, air will not be polluted.

People

can lead a healthy lifestyle

for

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seeking new

energy

resources from

the

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rare

places

. Despite these merits, it has some demerits. One possible drawback is that natural

spices

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species

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and creatures might be affected

as well as

extinction

due to

finding fossil

fuels

to

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the

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rare and untouched areas. Some

kind

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of

spices

are lived

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in

the

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rare

placed

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where

people

do not live

while

mining activities will do indeed that

spices

might extinct

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massive pollution. Another demerit is that it needs more financial expenses to find new oils and gases in the untouched venues because

this

kind of place is far away from the city

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it needs more time travel and transportation expenses and

some

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expenses.

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, the authority should invest a large amount of capital to

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a

nee

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new

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energy

in order to satisfy the increasing demand

of

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for

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the

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fossil

fuels

.

To conclude

, oils and gases are

an

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inevitable requirement sources around the world. A large number of folks can get more employment opportunities,

not

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and not

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release greenhouse

gas

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gases

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and

foot print

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footprint

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are the benefits of seeking new

energy

in rare

places

whilst requiring more money and natural

spices

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species

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and creatures might extinct

due to

pollution are the

disadvantage

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disadvantages

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of

this

tendency.

However

, I consider

this

trend has more benefits outweigh drawbacks.