The table shows the percentage of the rooms occupied in six hotels during May to September between 1985 and 2000. The table also indicates the star rating of each hotel.

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The table shows the

percentage

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of rooms occupied in six

hotels

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from May until September. The data is taken between 1985 to 2000 at 5-year intervals. A star rating of each

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included.

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, there are

two

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-star

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hotels

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, one 4

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and three 3

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. Hampton's and

Hamilton

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's are the top

two

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hotels

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throughout the four

years

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shown on the table,

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HotelConcorde

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holds the lowest

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of occupied rooms in 1995. We'll begin with the first

two

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years

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of 1985 and 1990. As mentioned above, Hampton's, a 3

-star

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hotel

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, and

Hamilton

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's, a 5

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hotel

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, top the occupied

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for both

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, standing tall at 100% for both

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. Following we have

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Olivia, a 3

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hotel

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, and

HotelConcorde

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, a five

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hotel

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with both

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having 90% of their rooms filled in 1985. In 1990

HotelConcorde

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percentage

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remained steady

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Hotel

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Olivia’s dropped by 5%.

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, we have The Continental, a 3

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hotel

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, and The Tower, a 4

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hotel

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. In 1985, the percentages were 79% and 57% meanwhile in 1990, they changed to 83% and 85% respectively. Moving on to the

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two

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years

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1995 and 2000. Hampton's and

Hamilton

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's are still standing strong with 90% and 95% in 1995 respectively. In 2000,

Hamilton

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percentage

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dropped by 25%

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Hamilton

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's increased to maximum capacity.

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, during 1995, we had The Continental and

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Olivia, which stood at 70% and 89% respectively, increasing by 6% for

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Olivia and 10% for The Continental in the next 5

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HotelConcorde

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and The Tower clocks in at the bottom as during 1995 they had 30% and 55% respectively.

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changed to 66% and 85% in 2000.

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