You know that a building company is planning to build new houses in immediate proximity to your house. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter – Say how you found out about their plan – Describe how you feel about it – Explain what you hope that they do about it
Dear Mr. Tom,
I hope
this
email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing this
letter to express my concern about the new building that you are planning to build in immediate proximity to my house near Gulshan in Dhaka.
I got the information about your plan from one of my friends who has been providing construction materials for many years in your esteemed real estate company. As far as I am concerned, your organization is going to build a multi-storied building adjacent to my own residence.
After hearing about the plan, I have been feeling a little bit worried. This
is because this
multi-storied building can be dangerous for my own house during the piling of the new building. Moreover
, there is a security concern as pedestrians are continuously moving beside my house.
In spite of having some security and safety issues during the construction works of a new building, I would suggest you take some precautionary steps to avoid any kind of unexpected incidents. We have to ensure that there is no risk in terms of people's lives.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon regarding this
matter.
Yours faithfully,
FaisalSubmitted by faisalmahamood on
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coherence cohesion
Remember to maintain a clear logical structure throughout your letter. The transition between paragraphs must be smooth and the line of thought should be easily followable.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should be dedicated to a single idea, ensuring clarity and conciseness. Avoid letting ideas spill over into multiple paragraphs.
task achievement
Thoroughly address all three bullet points in the task given. Ensure each point is sufficiently developed with enough detail and explanation.
task achievement
Adopt a writing tone that is appropriate for the context and recipient of the letter. Here, the tone should be formal due to the nature of the complaint and because the letter is addressed to a company manager. Some phrases seem too casual or informal for this context.
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