The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three differnt countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

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The line graph illustrates the percentage of elderly people at the age of 65 and above in Japan, Sweden and America from 1940 to 2040.

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, as can be seen, the figure for old individuals will have gone up over the period shown.

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, the proportion of people over 65 has been the lowest in

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Japan compared with the other two countries from 1940 to now and

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trend will continue till 2030 . In 1940, the percentage of American elderlies stood at just under 10%,

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that of Sweden was lower at approximately 7%. In the subsequent years, they both saw a dramatic rise,

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, the figure for Sweden took over America in about 1995.

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2028, it is estimated that the percentage of old people in Japan will have doubled.

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proportion will soare from one-tenth to a quarter in 2030 and will absolutely exceed the other two elderly figures in the following years.

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Topic Vocabulary:

aging population
proportion
demographics
population pyramid
geriatric
trend
increase/decrease
significant
milestone
predicted
reversal
comparison
contrast
historical data
future projection
statistical evidence
life expectancy
baby boomers
socioeconomic factors
elderly dependency ratio

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