The diagram details the process of making leather products. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram details the process of making leather products.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The diagram below illustrates the production process of leather products.
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, the main steps of the process begin with animal skin that, is taken to a
factory
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and combined with materials. The mixture is
then
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flattend
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flattened
and polished and taken back to the
factory
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to create leather products that are given to the community. The process starts with the drying of animal skin
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transported to a
factory
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by truck. Water is the main component of the next stages.
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is added to
lime
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the lime
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to be washed before being removed so that the lime can soak the material. The liquid is
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flattened and soaked in Tanin, which is composed of water and vegetable matter. The Tanin is soaked and polished before being placed in a transportation vehicle,
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as a lorry.
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leather is
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given to a
factory
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to create a variety of
prdoucts
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products
like, shoes and handbags. These creations are
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distributed amongst the general public for purchase.
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