The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and report in the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph provides information concerning the percentage of MP3, mobile phones, computers, and tablets owned by families between 1995 and 2015. The data can be divided into two groups, namely the
number
that experienced an upward trend and a downward trend. Figures are given in percentages.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the
number
of people purchasing electronic gadgets has increased every year. Starting with the percentage of MP3 players, it was 15
percent
in 1995 before a slight increase to 42
percent
in 2015 which was the lowest rate among the four given categories. Moving on to the ratio of people using mobile phones and computers, the
number
started at 8
percent
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and ended at 95
percent
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. It was the most popular device over the given period. The exception to
this
was the
number
of citizens using tablets, nobody used a tablet until 2022 before a dramatic increase to 82
percent
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in 2015.
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