the charts show information about the percentage of men and women age 60-64 who were eployed in four countries in 1970 ad 2000

The bar charts below illustrate the number of

men

and women who were employed in their early

60’s

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in Belgium,

USA

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the USA

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,

Japan

and Indonesia in 1970 and 2000.

Overall

, the percentage of

men

that were in work compared to women was higher in every single country in both the years studied. The rate differences increased in every country apart from

Japan

in 2000, which experienced an

overall

decrease in employment of both genders. Looking at the first bar chart, the highest figures for both sexes

was

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in the USA, 85 for

men

and 75 for women.

Japan

had the lowest statistics with 75 males and 55 females in work.

Japan

, Indonesia and Belgium all had similar differences in employment

rate

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rates

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,

this

being around 25% for each country. Looking at the second chart, the number

for

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females has dramatically declined in

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Belgium

from 62 to 8, whilst the statistic for males has

also

fallen from 78 to 50.

Similarly

, the

statistic

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for girls in the USA and Indonesia

also

fell from 79 to 40 and 65 to 50. Interestingly in

Japan

,

men

declined from 75 to 50 whilst ladies stayed relatively the same. the