The government spend about 220 million (poundsterling) a year supporting museums and galleries in the UK, and a similar amount subsiding the visual and perfoming arts. This is a huge sum to spend on minority interest, and the money would be better spent on more important things. It should be up to the people who enjoy cultural attractions to pay for them. What are your views?

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essay argued that providing additional resources to support the cultural and artistic life of the country is totally essential as that industry can effectively boost the income of tourism, and

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should actively bear the responsibility to administrate the museums and galleries. It is evident that taking part in art events, ranging from accessing local museums to sightseeing

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definitely take the initiative to support the art attractions and landmarks

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, access to museums, galleries and night markets should be freely available to all of the local residents and foreign visitors.

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traditional pop-up events in the cultural spots

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more people to travel

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