The graphs show crimes that took place in the city of Greenvale and arrests from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphs show the frequency of three types of crime and the sum of adult and juvenile arrests in a city called Greenvale between 2010 and 2019.

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it is clear that

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the most common atrocity over the nine-year period was burglary. The number of

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offences fell significantly during that period. Total car thefts in the city

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fell

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but at a lower rate

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On the detention front,

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adult apprehensions are down, the number of juvenile offenders is up

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Looking at the delinquency rate in additional detail, approximately 300 homes were damaged in 2010

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Just over 100 cars were stolen and about 80 people were robbed in the same year. Crime involving homes and cars rose sharply in 2011. Over the next eight years,

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, the statistics of these incidents gradually declined. The robberies of the men, meanwhile, were not significantly modified. The same spike was evident in arrests in 2011

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when approximately 340 adults and 80 youths were apprehended

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Catch-and-release for adults essentially halved after that,

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jailing juveniles doubled by 2019.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

173 words

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The graphs show crimes that took place in the city of Greenvale and arrests from 2010 to 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and report the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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