The maps show the changes on plan of dock between 1980 and today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps show the changes on plan of dock between 1980 and today. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two pictures illustrate how the layout of the Dock has changed from 1980 to the present day. In general,
it is clear that
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all the features have been changed over the past four decades, and some facilities, either buildings or landscape elements, have been added. Looking at the maps in detail, one significant development is the Dock grouped into two areas: on the north is an educational
area
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, and on the south is a residential
area
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. Afterwards, the bridge
has been
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built in the east to connect both sites, with a flood barrier beside it.
In addition
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, the paved riverwalk has been made to complete the resident areas. Another change is that all the ships that existed in 1980 were removed, except one on the left, and renovated into a ship museum.
Next,
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all the cranes were knocked down, and new buildings were created,
such
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as a sailing club and hotel (1). A
further
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development is an education centre, kids' playing
area
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, and apartments (2), which have been introduced, replacing the building that was previously a warehouse.
Moreover
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, a parking
area
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was constructed on the left side of the apartments (2).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 3 times.
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