The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries for UK residents to visit
The charts presented the
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
travelers
either from Change the spelling
travellers
UK
residents abroad or otherwise
, overseas residents who traveled
to Change the spelling
travelled
UK
over the years. Correct article usage
the UK
On the other hand
, the bar charts gives
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give
the
information about Correct article usage
apply
countries
that appeared to be most visited by the
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apply
UK
citizens.
Overall
, both trip
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trips
which
taken by the people of Correct pronoun usage
apply
UK
and Correct article usage
the UK
foreigner
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foreigners
are
Verb problem
have
increasing
throughout the years, from the period of 1979 to 1999. Wrong verb form
increased
However
, there were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
higher
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a higher
amount
of outlanders who came to UK
and it reached Correct article usage
the UK
it
peak in 1999 Change the pronoun
its
by
over 50 Change preposition
with
millions
people. Meanwhile, the Change to singular
million
UK
also
got the highest amount
of natives who went overseas in the same year for
almost 30 Change preposition
apply
millions
people.
Change to singular
million
Nevertheless
, UK
residents
most traveled Change noun form
resident's
residents'
country
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countries
both
are in Europe, with France being the first and Spain following behind. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Countries
like USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
Greek
, and Turkey, have a moderate Correct your spelling
Greece
amount
of travelers from the UK
. Hence
, the differences between European countries
that had been visited by the UK
residences
with other Replace the word
residents
countries
showed a quite big gap.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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