You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel, in their feedback, participants at the meeting told that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel - say what the participants liked about the hotel - explain why they were unhappy about the food - suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in future

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to your hotel I am a senior project manager we held a conference at Holten Hotel
last
week on Monday.
Initially
, the conference was perfect as discussed you arranged fifteen tables and that made us happy and
also
all the equipment speakers, cameras, and monitors were at our hands
in addition
, your customer services were amazing they help out when needed. I appreciate that the Hilton Hotel provided those so well.
However
, the thing that disappointed us was the
food
there were not various
food
options most of the foods were chicken majority of our team did not like chicken even though it was delicious
food
. I hope
this
letter helps you next time to provide various
food
for other customers. Yours faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a single idea or aspect. The first paragraph should introduce the purpose, the second should describe what participants liked, the third should address the food issue specifically, and the final paragraph should suggest improvements.
task achievement
Expand on why participants were unhappy with the food. Did it not accommodate dietary preferences or allergies? Was the taste or quality not up to standard? Providing specific details will improve the response to the task.
task achievement
Consider using a more formal tone and including a formal closing statement to increase the writing tone's suitability.
coherence cohesion
Use transitional words and phrases to link ideas more clearly and maintain logical flow within and between paragraphs.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Compliments
  • Ambiance
  • Professionalism
  • Hospitality
  • Quality
  • Variety
  • Freshness
  • Catering
  • Menu options
  • Dietary requirements
  • Feedback
  • Survey
  • Collaboration
  • Improvements
  • Rectify
  • Gastronomy
  • Culinary
  • Hospitality industry
  • Client satisfaction
  • Constructive criticism
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