Some people think that foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors during their visit to historic and cultural places. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some individuals

believed

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believe

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that foreign

visitors

should pay more

money

than local people during their visit to historic and cultural

places

. I totally disagree with

this

stament

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statement

because

foreing

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foreign

visitors

might decide not

coming

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to come

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to see cultural

places

anymore and historical

places

might have to

closed

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close

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due to

not having enough

money

to maintain them. One of the

reason

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reasons

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I did not support

this

statements

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statement

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is that

this

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the

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idea

of

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foreign

visitors

should pay more

money

to visit cultural

places

is totally wrong because

this

lead to

bad

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a bad

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image for our country.

Also

,

this

lead

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leads

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to

feel

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feeling

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unwelcome to foreign

visitors

to our country because they need to pay extra

money

to enjoy historic

places

. On top of

this

, feeling that they are not treated

equal

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equally

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as the rest of the society might

ofend

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offend

find

them.

For instance

, in most

of

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apply

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countries

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countries,

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tourists are welcome and public spaces offer them the best service and prices to make sure they will return the following year. Another reason why I do not support

this

statement is that cultural

places

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, as well as historic buildings,

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as well as

historic buildings might have to close because of not having

enought

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enough

money

to maintain them in

well

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good

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condition

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conditions

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due to

the fewer

visitors

every year.

This

might be because foreign tourists might decide not

coming

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to come

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back

due to

the necessity of making

a

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an

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extra payment. On top of

this

,

this

is an illogical way of treating

tourist

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tourists

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and they might decide to spread the

idea

of not visiting any more our country. To

illustratre

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illustrate

my point, many developed countries have

suffer

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suffered

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from losing tourists

due to

high

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the high

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cost of living

such

renting

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as renting

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a hotel or buying food so they abandon the

idea

of

comign

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coming

back, and

this

lead

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led

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to many people

loosing

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their jobs. In conclusion, foreign

visitors

should not be asked to pay more

for visiting

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to visit

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historic and cultural

places

because they might

decided

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decide

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not

coming

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to come

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back to visit these

places

and they might feel offended, so I strongly support the

idea

of not asking them for extra

money

and they should be treated the same way as the local people.