the diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy

the diagrams below show the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy
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illustrates
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the stages in the life of
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a lady
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lady
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ladybird
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bird
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, from egg to maturity,
while
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the other picture depicts the anatomy of a mature
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lady
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ladybird
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bird
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.
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there are four steps in the life cycle of a
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lady
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ladybird
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bird
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, starting
form
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from
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a
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an
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adult
ladybug
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lay
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its egg in the leaf and ending with
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mature
lady
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bird
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start with
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starting
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a new cycle.
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when an adult
ladybug
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ready for breeding, it
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then lays
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then
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lay its eggs on a bundle of leaves. after being spent out the time for two to five days on a leaf eggs
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emerge and develop to another stage called larva stage. In
this
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stage
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larva
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larvae
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shed their skin several times and spend out the time roughly twenty days . Afterwards,
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larva will
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be metamorphosis
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metamorphosis
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metamorphosed
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to become a pupa which
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in
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a leaf of plants.
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after seven days in its development pupa changes to
a
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an
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adult
ladybug
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.
in
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the
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some point
of
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in
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its
life
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life,
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a
ladybug
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will
starting
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a new cycle in terms of
breeding
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the breeding
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process.
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, a mature
ladybug
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compiled
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with the maturity anatomy which
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consists
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of
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a completely
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completely
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structure.
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with, a mature
ladybug
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has a head, two
antenna
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antennae
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,
eye
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an eye
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and
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a
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pronotum which is near bay the antenna. Two
antenna
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antennae
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have the function for
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the foods.
besides
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that
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it
covered
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wit
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beautiful wings which
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are
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colorful
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. four legs
are
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also
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contribute
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ladybug to
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ladybug's
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move or make it easy to attach
on
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to
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leaves.
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