Education is not a luxury, but a basic human right and as such should be free for everyone irrespective of personal wealth. Do you agree or disagree?

In
this
present world,
education
is considered by many to be a very crucial part of life. The studies should be available
for
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everyone. In my opinion, I firmly agree that schooling must be costless without regard to
financial
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circumstances of
families
as it will help the
country
grow
along with
the citizens.
Also
, there should be more
government funded
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public
school
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schools
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as well as
universities which can give access to all citizens of
country
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.
To begin
with,
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education
is one of
a
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fundamental
right
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of everyone that should be accessible to everyone. By making it free of cost, it ensures that each person is equally provided
the
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platform and
furthermore
,
reduced
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social disparities.
For Example
, there are around 130 billion population in India which does require a
government funded
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school
or alternative, financial subsidiaries offered to the private
school
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schools
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which allow access to the
families
instead
of disparities on
based of
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financial status of
families
.
Furthermore
, if any child born
in
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the
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poor
families
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family
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which possibly get a basic
education
in the
country
and
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any scholarship can be given by
government
to the students who has
a
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potential to become a doctor or engineer. They can be an asset to the nation. Importantly,
such
highly talented skilled
person
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people
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can benefit
to
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the
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society.
therefore
, the nation should have a single
education
policies
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and
centralised
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system.
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, all states have
a
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different
education
policy
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policies
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in India which collapsed the
education
system and
also
, it will be challenging
to
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the
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families
while
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doing
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an
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inter
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states
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transfer within the
country
. To summarise, the
government
should have a centralised budget,
education
policies and cost-free
education
to
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the people of
country
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. There should be more
government funded
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school
which can discourage to support the
wealthy
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of wealthy
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families
and talented people can get a platform which
benefit
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to
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the development of
nation
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the nation
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fundamental right
  • accessible
  • social mobility
  • personal and professional development
  • overall development
  • equality
  • social disparities
  • access
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