The line graph compares the number of cars stolen for every 1000 vehicles in four countries from 1990 to 1999.
A glance at the chart above compares the amount of car theft in four countries from 1990 to 1999.
In general, there was an upward trend in all places given during 1994 to 1997. Great Britain marked the highest point in all periods mentioned, from around 18 by 1990 to the biggest number of 20 by 1997. Different from that, others were below 15 for almost a decade.
According to
the data, it is apparent that the number of stolen vehicles went up only in Sweden from 1997 to 1999 from 12 to around 14, whilst it fell in other
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the other
Furthermore
, France and Canada had similar trends in the beginning but then
they acted differently until met at the same point about 6 by 1999. However
, France got more theft vehicles than Canada for 8 years.
To conclude
, Great Britain always hit above 16 while
the lowest one Canada presented under 7 of stolen cars each year.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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