The table below gives information about the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The table provides data on the population of New Zealand among 4 age categories during the years 2011 to 2012
Firstly
, it is evident that a significant number of increasing observed among elderly dwellers by 4% from 500.000 to 900.000 . Contrastingly, in 2011, the population within the age group of 15-39 comprised 1,520,000 residents
however
, one year later,
this
indicator decreased by 0.2
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.
Secondly
, in 2012, people in the 40-64 age group exceeded
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60000 in comparison with 2011 , from 1.400.00 to 1.460.000 respectively .
On the contrary
, the proportion of youngsters under 15 years old in 2011 was 801.750 and in 2012 declined by 0.2% ( 800.000) . Looking from an
overall
perspective , the population of New Zealand between 2011 and 2012 which started at 4.400.000 culminated with 4.460.00 mere 0.6% was expanded .
Also
, the noticeable change was among old-aged
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of 400,000 humans .
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