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The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph displays the amount of goods shipped in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different means of transport.
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road
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the road
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 remained the primary way of transport during the 28-year period. it is
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 noteworthy that shipments increased for all modes except rail, which was essentially unchanged. The most commonly used way of transport was
road
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by road
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, with road freight shipments increasing significantly from about 70
million
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tonnes
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 in 1974 to just below 100
million
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tonnes
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 in 2002. In comparison, only about 5
million
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tonnes
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 of goods were shipped by pipeline
1974
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in 1974
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. The number
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 climbed considerably to
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approximately
 22
million
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tonnes
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 in around 1995 before staying at
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 level until 2002. The volume of cargo transported by water showed a climb from about 40 to 65
million
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tonnes
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 between 1974 and 2002, with a small dip in 1998. Rail freight shipments
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 started at roughly 40
million
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tonnes
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. After falling to about 30
million
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tonnes
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 in around 1995, they returned to their original level by the end of the period.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "climbed" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Overview
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Mode of transport
  • Quantity
  • Comparison
  • Goods
  • Transported
  • Significant
  • Noticeable
  • General trend
  • Time span
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