Plastic bags, plastics bottles, and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?
In recent years, there has been an increasing number of
plastic
utilisation in many products
such
as bottles and packagings
, which has a detrimental impact on the environment. Many of these Fix the agreement mistake
packaging
plastic
waste products
end up in the ocean and have caused many problems to the habitat and animals that live there. I suggest that governments
and individuals
should take the
measures to address Correct article usage
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this
issue.
The First and foremost reason why people use plastic
products
is that affordable and seemingly ubiquitous at every single store in town. However
, the overwhelming usage of these products
has caused an environmental crisis, particularly because many plastic
products
are not recycled and finished as garbage in the water
. This
problem has led to the imbalance of ecosystems in the river and ocean. Many species of fish have faced endangerment, and many vegetation lost their habitat because of the polluted water
by plastics. The devastating result of the research confirms that water
nowadays contains microplastics as a result
of huge numbers of litter
floating on the water
. It is dangerous because microplastics are toxic litter
that cannot be seen. Once the microplastics are consumed by fish or humans through the water
, that would impact on
human health in the near future.
To deal with the problem, joint action is needed between Change preposition
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governments
and individuals
around the globe. Governments
have to make a law to diminish plastic
garbage by banning individuals
’ habit of throwing this
kind of litter
everywhere. Furthermore
, the plastic
products
recycling policy should be implemented by governments
, so that the vast majority of litter
can be used as new products
. Regarding to
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individuals
, people should encourage their community to use reusable bottled water
and packaging to reduce the addicting usage of plastic
products
. For example
, many local stores in Indonesia provide water
bottle discounts for those who use reusable bottle
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bottled
water
. We should show that there are direct benefits for everyone using reusable products
.
In conclusion, the utilisation of plastic
products
is seemingly inevitable for human needs. Besides
the utility of that kind of product, the effect of this
plastic
garbage on the environment seems unfair to the flora and fauna below the water
and, indeed for
human health. A joint action should be taken by Change preposition
to
governments
and individuals
to reduce the usage of non-recycled plastic
products
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