The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
A glance at a line graph provided reveals the amount of emitted carbon footprint in four distinctive nations namely
United
Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, Correct article usage
the United
Portugal
, measured in Correct word choice
and Portugal
tonne
, from 1967 to 2007. Fix the agreement mistake
tonnes
Overall
, there was a recessive growth pattern witnessed in the data of the CO2 emissions per person in United
Kingdom, Correct article usage
the United
Sweden
and the reverse was true for the others.
In terms of exhaust fumes Correct word choice
and Sweden
of
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from
United
Kingdom, despite being the highest released amount compared to the others at over 10 in 1967, it went down steadily and consistently to approximately 9 which maintained its crown after 4 decades.
With regard to the amount of Sweden’s carbon dioxide, it accelerated Correct article usage
the United
form
about 8 to 10, which was its peak in 977, before dropping drastically and consistently to approximately 5 after a 40-year epoch.
With respect to the data Correct your spelling
from
of
CO2 sent out by Change preposition
on
Italian
and Portuguese, Fix the agreement mistake
Italians
although
they had the same trend, they differed from
their levels of growth. The former climbed vigorously and continuously from 4 to around 8, which doubled its initial point. Meanwhile the latter surged from approximately 2 to about 6 which ended at a similar point Change preposition
in
with
Sweden during the mentioned period.Change preposition
to
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