The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (Co2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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A glance at a line graph provided reveals the amount of emitted carbon footprint in four distinctive nations namely
United
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the United
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Kingdom, Sweden, Italy,
Portugal
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and Portugal
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, measured in
tonne
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tonnes
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, from 1967 to 2007.
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, there was a recessive growth pattern witnessed in the data of the CO2 emissions per person in
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Kingdom,
Sweden
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and Sweden
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and the reverse was true for the others. In terms of exhaust fumes
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United
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Kingdom, despite being the highest released amount compared to the others at over 10 in 1967, it went down steadily and consistently to approximately 9 which maintained its crown after 4 decades. With regard to the amount of Sweden’s carbon dioxide, it accelerated
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about 8 to 10, which was its peak in 977, before dropping drastically and consistently to approximately 5 after a 40-year epoch. With respect to the data
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CO2 sent out by
Italian
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Italians
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and Portuguese,
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they had the same trend, they differed
from
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their levels of growth. The former climbed vigorously and continuously from 4 to around 8, which doubled its initial point. Meanwhile the latter surged from approximately 2 to about 6 which ended at a similar point
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Sweden during the mentioned period.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon dioxide emissions
  • per person
  • United Kingdom
  • Sweden
  • Italy
  • Portugal
  • graph
  • compare
  • average
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • peak
  • decline
  • years
  • period
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