Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advatages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Museums are places where historical remains and cultural antiques are stored and preserved in order to present what the past had to the present and future

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. It is usually funded by the government and

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available

for public usage with its free-from-charges service.

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, there are some museums that have some kind of incentive barrier that keeps them from

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freely visited by the public.

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has its own

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and disadvantages, and I firmly believe that the

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are

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making

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innefficient

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inefficient

. Let's talk about the

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first. By gatekeeping the Cultural

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with some kind of fee, it would

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help the

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to keep on running by providing it with a much needing funding for the

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, exhibits, and extensive research and educational program. It would

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help to deal with crowd control, as making the

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exclusive rather than inclusive would demotivate

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to flock and gather at the

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,

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, reducing the crowd density and making the surrounding atmosphere more suited for a deep and intimate historical and art experience.

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, I believe the disadvantages

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overshadow its

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.

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, history, culture, and art are not something that you would need to pay to experience. By forcing

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to pay, it essentially forms a socioeconomy barrier that just would not be fair for low-income individuals and families.

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, the fact that the

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would not be as crowded should be viewed as a flaw, as it means that

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are going to the

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failing the role of the

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as an educational

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. In the end, incentivizing

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to pay for access to a

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would not be the best

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. It would only gatekeep wealthy

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with

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ones and create an unnecessary socioeconomy disparity where the wealthy

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more access to education compared to the poor. Not only that, but it would

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refute the idea of

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as an educational

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where it

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to be an

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where everyone could visit and experience.