The graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Carribean island, between 2010 and 2017.
The given chart illustrates the proportion of a certain Caribbean island’s visitors from 2010 to 2017 in two categories based on the accommodation they chose. In general, the number of tourists who chose each category increased throughout the given period.
According to
the graph, among a Linking Words
million
tourists in 2010, 3 out of 4 people chose to live on the island Use synonyms
while
the remaining stayed on cruise ships. In the following year, the number of visitors living on the island remained the same before it doubled in 2013. and remained stable until the end of the period. Linking Words
However
, the quantity declined to almost 1.2 Linking Words
million
in 2016.
In terms of guests staying on cruise ships, Use synonyms
although
the number rose to twice what it was Linking Words
initially
in 2011, it went back to a quarter Linking Words
million
in the next year. In the following years, it gradually grew and exceeded the other category between 2015 and 2016. Use synonyms
Finally
, it concluded the period by having 2 Linking Words
million
visitors.Use synonyms
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