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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europen countries

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five Europen countries
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The presented tables display the
sales
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 development of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and
bananas
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 in five countries (UK, Switzerland, Denmark, Belgium, and
Sweden
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) in the period of 1999 and 2004.
Overall
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, in a span of five years, the
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 of coffee increased in all five countries
while
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 the demand for
bananas
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 in some countries, namely Belgium and
Sweden
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, showed a downward trend.
According to
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 the data, the largest
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 of coffee in 1999 were recorded in Switzerland with a total amount of 3
million
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euros
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.
Nonetheless
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, the UK took over the first position, significantly escalating from 1.5
million
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euros
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 in 1999 to 20
million
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euros
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 in 2004.
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,
Sweden
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 was the country with the least
sales
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 in both years, 0.8
million
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euros
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 and 1
million
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euros
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 respectively. Meanwhile, the
sales
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 of
bananas
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 experienced a different pattern. The UK consistently became the biggest market for
bananas
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 as indicated by the
sales
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 that tripled from 15
million
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euros
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 in 1999 to 47
million
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euros
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 in 2004. Denmark contributed the smallest revenue from
bananas
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 with merely 0.6
million
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 in 1999.
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, the situation changed in 2004 when
Sweden
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 placed in the lowest rank with
sales
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 of 0.9
million
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euros
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.
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