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The presented table gives information about costs of the projects in the future five year period in American dollars for three environmental project for sustainable foresty.The supplied pie chart illustrates the expected expediture breakdown allocation for the next five year as the projects are set up.

The presented table gives information about costs of the projects in the future five year period in American dollars for three environmental project for sustainable foresty.The supplied pie chart illustrates the expected expediture breakdown allocation for the next five year as the projects are set up.
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The given table displays the projected cost to complete sustainability forestry projects in three regions (West Africa, Central Africa, and Southeast Asia) in the period of five years.
Additionally
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, the presented pie chart illustrates the proportion of each expenditure in the first
year
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 of the
project
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.
Overall
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, the total budgets for the projects are varied across the regions, with Southeast Asia recorded as the highest.
According to
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 the data, the program cost in West Africa will start at 10.5
million
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 in
year
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 one and will continue to decrease until
year
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 three (2.5
million
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) before increasing again to 3.5
million
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 in the fifth
year
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.
Next,
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completing the
project
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 in Central America will require 20
million
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 in the first
year
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 and the number will show a decrease to 12
million
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 before levelling off to 5
million
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 by the end of the
project
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. Meanwhile, the
project
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 in Southeast Asia will need 30
million
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 in the beginning and the amount will continue to increase to up to 50
million
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 in
year
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 five. At the beginning of the
project
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, half of the budget will be allocated to pay for the employees' salaries.
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, a third of the expenditure will be secured for set-up costs. Meanwhile, the remaining capital will be equally distributed to conduct training and cover office expenses.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, project, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sustainable forestry
  • environmental projects
  • expenditure breakdown
  • allocation
  • trends
  • fiscal forecasting
  • comparative analysis
  • long-term benefits
  • investment
  • funding sources
  • discrepancy
  • research and development
  • educational initiatives
  • planting strategies
  • financial requirements
  • impact assessment
  • cost analysis
  • project viability
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