With the increased global demand in oil amd gas, undiscovered areas of world should be opened up to access more resources.

Nowadays growing demand of the population and the higher use of

energy

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for daily consumption has increased dramatically

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why the fulfill the power requirement people have started discovering new places to satisfy the demand for

energy

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. But I completely disagree with

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argument. First of all, gaining new resources is a good thing but it has some hazardous effects. Environmental risks are the main factors that need to

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care of, with

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apply

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access to

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in newly discovered

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a risk

to spills

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of spilling

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oil

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on nature

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way we put their local habitat in danger. Sometimes by fault, we kill wild animals and unknown species of plants.

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, Studies show that about on earth 26% of the land has been habitual because of the

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spill and fire-prone

areas

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because of getting more valuable resources in

a new

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new areas

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areas

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.

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, building new and alternative sources of

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and gas needs a significant amount of money that build the power station and the reservoirs to collect the power to use it later. Because of

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construction the damage to nature and

another habitat

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.

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, because of the construction and

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losses increased greenhouse gases.

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, the newspaper Times shows that because of creating new sources of

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some islands are heavily polluted because of leakage of gases and

oil

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.

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, with the leaking of

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and gases increased pollution on earth that’s why undiscovered

areas

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are never opened for gaining new resources. In conclusion,

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need for

energy

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has increased but, the need for

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environmental protection and social concerns has increased.