You recently saw an advertisement about a business conference that can be helpful for your work. Write a letter to your manager asking permission to attend the conference.

Dear Fatih, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing
this
letter to ask for attend to a
Food
Safety
conference
. I saw an advertisement on Linkedin.It
to
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be held between
on
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15-20 January in Ankara. Many famous scientists will attend the
conference
. As you know my bachelor's degree
in
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Food
Science and I am working as
Quality
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Supervisor.
Food
Safety
is our priority as
company
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and we carry out many improvements to increase
Food
Safety
Degree. As a still master science student in
Microbiyology
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Microbiology
, I think
this
conference
will contribute to
many
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informations
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information
to
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me and our company.
This
is not only a
conference
, it is
also
a workshop.
Therefore
, I can learn new technologies about
food
safety
and maybe I can meet anyone who can
solves
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our
food
sfety
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safety
incidents.
This
conference
will expand my network and benefit my career. In my absence, my intern Mert will replace me.
Hence
he can gain
an
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experience in
early
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career.In urgent situations, you can call me
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my mobile phone and
also
i
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will
be
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check my
e mails
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. I look forward to your reply, Yours sincerely, Merve Kerküklü
Submitted by mervekerkuklu on

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph contains a clear main idea and develops that idea coherently. Connect your sentences and ideas more smoothly with linking phrases.
task achievement
Provide more detailed information on how attending the conference will specifically help in your current projects or duties. Also, clarify how your work will be handled efficiently in your absence to strengthen your argument.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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