An increasing number of developing countries are expanding tourist industries. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

These days,

tourism

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the tourism

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sector has revolutionised rapidly as compared to the past period

due to

globalisation.

As a result

, some developing

nations

try to

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expaned

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expand

the

tourism

sectors.

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trend has benefits

as well as

drawbacks, even though, I think

this

trend has more advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons. There are some merits of improving

tourism

fields in the

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countries. One of the major benefits is that many

traveler

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may

be visited

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in

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these

nations

while

local vendors and folks can obtain more earnings from tourists, and

as a result

, their livelihood can be improved.

For example

,

traveler

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travelers

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have to spend more money to buy things and travel in order to they can explore places when they stay in the developing

nations

. Another advantage is that the

authority

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get more taxes from

tourism

,

therefore

,

this

amount can

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to develop the infrastructure of the

nations

,

thus

, the population will get all the amenities like hi-tech

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. There are several demerits of

this

phenomenon. One of the major disadvantages is that natural resources might be diminished by

over

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consumptions

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because

these kind

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of

nations

have only limited resources

while

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it

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can be decreased by innumerable

traveler

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by

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using

it

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.

For instance

, India has limited water

resource

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but many tourists visit and use

this

resource enormously,

consequently

, the future generation will

be suffered

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the

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scarcity of water. Another demerit is that traffic congestion

is

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increased drastically for

tourist

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tourists

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visit

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these

nations

and already face

this

issue in these

nations

.

To conclude

,

although

improving the local people's livelihood and developing infrastructure are the advantages, increasing traffic

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and reducing the natural resources are the disadvantages of

this

phenomenon.

However

, I think

this

tendency has more benefits outweigh the drawbacks.