Shopping is the favorite free time activity for many young people today. Why do you think this has happened? Should young people be encouraged to do different activities in their free time rather than shopping? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, shopping is quite popular among the younger generation.
As a result
, these days, youngster's
favourite spare Fix the agreement mistake
youngsters'
time
activity is shopping because they are being
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apply
the
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apply
shopaholic
. Fix the agreement mistake
shopaholics
The teens
should learn new Correct article usage
Teens
skill
in their free Fix the agreement mistake
skills
time
instead
of doing
shopping. Correct your spelling
going
This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
To begin
with, there are several reasons behind
the youngsters are shopping in their free Change preposition
apply
time
. They are being the
shopaholic which they addicted to Correct article usage
apply
buy
more and more new things even if they do not use and Change the verb form
buying
require
, Correct pronoun usage
require them
this
because
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is because
of
they can easily Change preposition
apply
influence
by advertisements, Wrong verb form
be influenced
therefore
, they do shopping whenever they have free time
. For example
, when teenagers go shopping while
they not only buy products but Correct word choice
apply
also
they take some funs
with whom go with. To be more elaborate, these days shopping is not just buying Correct subject-verb agreement
fun
stuffs
, there Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
is
some funds included. Change the verb form
are
Hence
youngsters do
shopping when they have free Correct your spelling
go
times
.
Fix the agreement mistake
time
However
, the
young people should learn new Correct article usage
apply
skill
in their spare Fix the agreement mistake
skills
time
instead
of shopping because the young stage should be used appropriately without wasting like shopping. In other words
, they should focus on their skills and academic excellence that
how to improve and what new Correct pronoun usage
apply
skill
learn. Fix the agreement mistake
skills
For instance
, learning a new skill
in youth period, it
will enhance their skills and knowledge in order to they will be succeed. Correct pronoun usage
apply
Hence
, young folks should learn new skill
in their spare Fix the agreement mistake
skills
time
rather than shopping because it brings several benefits notbonly
present but Correct your spelling
not only
also
the
future.
Change preposition
to the
To conclude
, teenagers do
shopping when they have free Correct your spelling
go
times
because they Fix the agreement mistake
time
addicted
to Add a missing verb
are addicted
purchase
new products and they Change the verb form
purchasing
take
some fun Verb problem
have
while
shopping. Although
, they should learn new Correct word choice
However
skill
in their spare Fix the agreement mistake
skills
times
Fix the agreement mistake
time
instead
of shopping because it will enhance their future with skills and knowledge.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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