The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The images illustrate the stages of making

sugar

from

sugar

cane.

Overall

, there are seven steps in the

process

of producing

sugar

, starting with growing the

sugar

canes

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and finishing with drying and cooling. The first stage of the

process

is growing the

sugar

canes

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. It takes 12-18 months to grow up.

Sugar

canes

like the sun and the high temperature very much. It will help the plant grow better. We have two ways to harvest. The first one is the

process

of harvesting by the farmers. They will use

the a

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big knife to cut the

canes

and

this

way will waste time and lose strength. And the other one is harvested by the machines.

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Therefore

, they just need to use the buttons to control the cutting machine to harvest

sugar

canes

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. After

that

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the

sugar

cane will go into the crushing machine. It makes the

juice

from the

sugar

canes

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. The

juice

is going

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to the limestone filter and that

process

is called purifying

juice

. That

juice

will be put into the evaporator and that will heat the

juice

in the evaporator. Heat will make the

juice

to be a syrup. They will use the centrifuge to separate

sugar

crystals from the syrup. The

sugar

crystals go drying and cooling will be

sugar

.