A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, describe what this book was about, explain how this book influenced you, say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am writing this
letter very happy. Because,
I read your Remove the comma
apply
book
last
week. That is
very special to me. The
following paragraph I will discuss Change preposition
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about
it.
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First,
I am fan
of your Add an article
a fan
book
. When you released
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release
this
book
part, that time I will get and read
. I addicted in two years, Correct pronoun usage
read it
humans’
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to humans’
life styles
, how to Correct your spelling
lifestyles
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live Verb problem
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people
, what Change preposition
with people
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the
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that is
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help
how to manage our personal Change the verb form
helps
life
and love life
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Furthermore
, that is
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important
me
. My friends, my family and my Change preposition
to me
relative
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relatives
also
read this
book
. They discuss
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that is
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a very
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. Your book
was
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life
styles
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lifestyles
also
help
to lot of humans. I know your hard work. we are expecting more.
Yours faithfully,
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single, clear idea that directly relates to the task given. Always stay on topic.
coherence cohesion
Use a logical structure to organize your letter clearly. Introduction, body, and conclusion should be distinctive and flow naturally from one to the other.
coherence cohesion
Include a formal closing and signature that matches the tone of the task (e.g., 'Yours sincerely' followed by your full name for formal correspondence).
task achievement
Effort should be made to fully address all three points required by the task: description of the book's content, explanation on how it influenced you, and its potential influence on others.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter. Use formal language and expressions suitable for writing to an editor.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite