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The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.

The bar chart below shows estimated world illiteracy rates by region and by gender for the last year.
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The graph illustrates the percentages of taught populations around the world, distributing their origins and sex in the year 2000.
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, South Asians achieved the highest learning rates,
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 people in the developed countries were the least literal societies. Notably, the females received more attention in education than the males. The second most educated nations were the Arabs with more than 50% of educated females and around 30% of educated males, followed by the Sub-Saharan African community reaching 30% of literal men and almost 50% of literal women. The fourth-ranking societies were the East-Asian, scoring 20% in the feminine community and less than 10% in the muscular one. Meanwhile, in Latin America, the proportions of teaching among girls and boys is approximately the same at about 10%.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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