The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph demonstrates the proportion of changes

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that occured

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occured

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occurred

in the fee of three different metals which are

copper

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, zinc and

nickel

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in 2014.

Overall

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,

copper

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and

nickel

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prices went down

while

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zinc prices went up slightly.

Nickel

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was the one that showed

significant

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a significant

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decrase

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decrease

decreases

. Regarding the

copper

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and

nickel

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, these were slightly changed during 2014.

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, there was

steady

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a steady

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three

month

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months

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for all three metals. In detail,

Nickel

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showed

6

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a 6

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% rise at the beginning of

the

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apply

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2014. It sharply

decrease

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decreases

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to 3% discount until June. After

that

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that,

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it started to increase and

end

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ended

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up

with

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apply

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being 1% more than its previous

month

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month's

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price in December.

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,

copper

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and

nickel

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did not show significant change throughout one year.

Copper

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started the year with

2

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a 2

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% rise and started to decrease steadily until May. After that, it started to increase and ended up nearly 1,5%. Regarding

the

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apply

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zinc, it started with

1

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a 1

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% rise and grew it 3% by February.

Then

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it showed

essential

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an essential

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decrease

1

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of 1

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% discount until June. It became 2%

at the end

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of the year.

Among

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Between

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July and

September

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September,

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the prices did not change and the market was stabilised.