The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph demonstrates the proportion of changes
Correct pronoun usage
that occured
occured
in the fee of three different metals which are Correct your spelling
occurred
copper
, zinc and nickel
in 2014.
Overall
, copper
and nickel
prices went down while
zinc prices went up slightly. Nickel
was the one that showed significant
Correct article usage
a significant
decrase
. Regarding the Correct your spelling
decrease
decreases
copper
and nickel
, these were slightly changed during 2014. Additionally
, there was steady
three Correct article usage
a steady
month
for all three metals.
In detail, Change to a plural noun
months
Nickel
showed 6
% rise at the beginning of Correct article usage
a 6
the
2014. It sharply Change the article
apply
decrease
to 3% discount until June. After Change the verb form
decreases
that
it started to increase and Add a comma
that,
end
up Wrong verb form
ended
with
being 1% more than its previous Change preposition
apply
month
price in December.
Change noun form
month's
Moreover
, copper
and nickel
did not show significant change throughout one year. Copper
started the year with 2
% rise and started to decrease steadily until May. After that, it started to increase and ended up nearly 1,5%. Regarding Correct article usage
a 2
the
zinc, it started withCorrect article usage
apply
1
% rise and grew it 3% by February. Correct article usage
a 1
Then
it showed essential
decreaseCorrect article usage
an essential
1
% discount until June. It became 2% Change preposition
of 1
at the end
of the year. Among
July and Change preposition
Between
September
the prices did not change and the market was stabilised.Add a comma
September,
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Vocabulary: Replace the words copper, nickel with synonyms.
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