The map below shows the changes that have taken place at the waterfront area of a town called Darwin between 2009 and 2014.
The presented maps display the development of the waterfront
area
in the town of Darwin in the period of
2009 and 2014. In general, there were several major changes in Change preposition
between
this
timeframe, including the replacement of industrial area
with educational Fix the agreement mistake
areas
facility
and green space Fix the agreement mistake
facilities
as well as
the construction of a harbor.
First of all, it is clear that
the industrial area
was completely demolished in 2014. A university building and a new swimming pool were constructed on the site where manufacturing activity used to occur. In addition
to that, the residential
buildings Correct quantifier usage
number of residential
had
doubled in 2014. The former industrial site got greener because some trees were planted there. Unnecessary verb
apply
Furthermore
, a harbour was built by the sea and a footpath connected it with the main road.
Despite the progress, there were several places that remained intact. For instance
, the school and the convention centre were on
the same location, which was near the lake. The fishing Change preposition
in
area
was also
still situated at the end
of the main road.Submitted by tnindrasetiawan on
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