The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
The diagram illustrates the
process
in
which Change preposition
by
uranium
is used to produce nuclear power
. Overall
, there are six stages that introduce it from ground to waste.
Primarily, uranium
is extracted from ground earth by a mining process
. After the process
is completed, uranium
ore is found, converted, and enriched to produce fuel
pellets of U-235. Lastly
, fuel
is introduced into power
plants, where it begins the process
of uranium
fission, which powers the generators, and thus
electricity is generated and distributed.
After a period of four years, the fuel
has been consumed and removed, and there are a number of fuels that can’t be recycled and directed into containers and become waste; however
, there is a quantity of fuel
that can be reprocessed and generates
more electricity.
Correct subject-verb agreement
generate
Overall
, nuclear power
can be considered a renewable energy as uranium
can be re-used
and increase Correct your spelling
reused
power
generation; meanwhile, not all pellets can be re-processed and have to be destroyed.Submitted by amrmohsen12 on
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