The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

The diagram below shows how uranium is used in the production of nuclear power.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words
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The diagram illustrates the
process
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in
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by
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which
uranium
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is used to produce nuclear
power
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.
Overall
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, there are six stages that introduce it from ground to waste. Primarily,
uranium
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is extracted from ground earth by a mining
process
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. After the
process
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is completed,
uranium
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ore is found, converted, and enriched to produce
fuel
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pellets of U-235.
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,
fuel
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is introduced into
power
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plants, where it begins the
process
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of
uranium
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fission, which powers the generators, and
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electricity is generated and distributed. After a period of four years, the
fuel
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has been consumed and removed, and there are a number of fuels that can’t be recycled and directed into containers and become waste;
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, there is a quantity of
fuel
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that can be reprocessed and
generates
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more electricity.
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, nuclear
power
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can be considered a renewable energy as
uranium
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can be
re-used
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reused
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and increase
power
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generation; meanwhile, not all pellets can be re-processed and have to be destroyed.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process, uranium, power, fuel with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive material
  • Reactor core
  • Control rods
  • Coolant
  • Thermal energy
  • Steam generator
  • Turbine
  • Generator
  • Spent fuel
  • Radioactive waste
  • Depleted uranium
  • Decommissioning
  • Sustainable energy
  • Nuclear proliferation
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