Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

According to

the human rights principle, every person is free to choose their

options

.

This

freedom to determine what we want should be applied to a personal's life. Some people argue that we face abundant

options

in our lives.

However

,

while

I agree with the notion, I believe

options

could

also

expose us to many opportunities in different aspects.

To begin

with, a huge number of education paths might boost the student's potential and benefit them in the future. A wide range of courses allows students to explore and decide the right path that suits their best interests to excel in the chosen path or try other

options

to complement their existing skills.

This

can be possible by taking some elective courses in formal education or even taking multiple online courses on the internet, and

this

could enhance their resume and benefit them when seeking their future job.

For example

, many fresh graduates who have other skill portfolios outside their initial field have a higher chance of being accepted by the best companies than other graduates with just a few skills. With regard to

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field, the fact that the high

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turnover rate recently shows that there are so many preferences for career-shifting opportunities, and

this

also

influence

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the

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one’s career journey

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positive direction.

Beside

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there are many short-term contract jobs out there,

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decision

of moving

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out to other companies might lead to better salaries and more space

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professional growth.

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the development of technology,

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for example

, growing demand for digital jobs

such

as digital marketer and data scientist and those who

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a decision to

such

jobs tend to experience accelerated income growth and quicker promotion into leadership positions. In conclusion,

although

I believe that there are too many

options

out there, from my perspective, the influence

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the

options

trigger

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to get

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better opportunities for individuals

both

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to

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skill addition and career growth.