Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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According to
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the human rights principle, every person is free to choose their
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freedom to determine what we want should be applied to a personal's life. Some people argue that we face abundant
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in our lives.
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,
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I agree with the notion, I believe
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could
also
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expose us to many opportunities in different aspects.
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with, a huge number of education paths might boost the student's potential and benefit them in the future. A wide range of courses allows students to explore and decide the right path that suits their best interests to excel in the chosen path or try other
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to complement their existing skills.
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can be possible by taking some elective courses in formal education or even taking multiple online courses on the internet, and
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could enhance their resume and benefit them when seeking their future job.
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, many fresh graduates who have other skill portfolios outside their initial field have a higher chance of being accepted by the best companies than other graduates with just a few skills. With regard to
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the professional
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field, the fact that the high
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turnover rate recently shows that there are so many preferences for career-shifting opportunities, and
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also
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influence
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influences
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the
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one’s career journey
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positive direction.
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there are many short-term contract jobs out there,
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decision
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out to other companies might lead to better salaries and more space
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professional growth.
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the development of technology,
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for example
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, growing demand for digital jobs
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as digital marketer and data scientist and those who
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a decision to
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jobs tend to experience accelerated income growth and quicker promotion into leadership positions. In conclusion,
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I believe that there are too many
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out there, from my perspective, the influence
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the
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to get
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better opportunities for individuals
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in both
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to
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skill addition and career growth.
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Task Achievement
Ensure that you directly address the prompt's question by giving a clear opinion in your introduction and conclusion. While you indicate a position, make sure it is distinct and consistent throughout the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
To improve clarity, vary your sentence structures and ensure that pronouns refer clearly to the nouns they replace. Use a range of cohesive devices but be wary of using them excessively or inappropriately.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overwhelmed
  • decision fatigue
  • paralysis by analysis
  • consumerism
  • globalization
  • personal autonomy
  • market saturation
  • option overload
  • decision-making process
  • psychological well-being
  • buyer's remorse
  • customization
  • trade-offs
  • minimalism
  • information superhighway
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