Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to
the human rights principle, every person is free to choose their options
. This
freedom to determine what we want should be applied to a personal's life. Some people argue that we face abundant options
in our lives. However
, while
I agree with the notion, I believe options
could also
expose us to many opportunities in different aspects.
To begin
with, a huge number of education paths might boost the student's potential and benefit them in the future. A wide range of courses allows students to explore and decide the right path that suits their best interests to excel in the chosen path or try other options
to complement their existing skills. This
can be possible by taking some elective courses in formal education or even taking multiple online courses on the internet, and this
could enhance their resume and benefit them when seeking their future job. For example
, many fresh graduates who have other skill portfolios outside their initial field have a higher chance of being accepted by the best companies than other graduates with just a few skills.
With regard to professional
field, the fact that the high Add an article
the professional
workers'
turnover rate recently shows that there are so many preferences for career-shifting opportunities, and Change noun form
workers
this
also
influence
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influences
the
one’s career journey Correct article usage
apply
to
Change preposition
in
the
positive direction. Correct article usage
a
Beside
there are many short-term contract jobs out there, Replace the word
Besides
the
decision Correct word choice
and the
of moving
out to other companies might lead to better salaries and more space Change preposition
to move
to
professional growth. Change preposition
for
Along with
the development of technology, Taking
Verb problem
apply
for example
, growing demand for digital jobs such
as digital marketer and data scientist and those who take
a decision to Correct your spelling
make
such
jobs tend to experience accelerated income growth and quicker promotion into leadership positions.
In conclusion, although
I believe that there are too many options
out there, from my perspective, the influence from
the Change preposition
of
options
trigger
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triggers
to get
better opportunities for individuals Verb problem
apply
both
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in both
to
skill addition and career growth.Change preposition
apply
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