The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The map below shows three possible locations for a leisure centre. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
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The map illustrates the demographics of a small town, with the intention of building a new entertainment facility.
Overall
,
this
countryside includes two main urban spots ( B and C) and one natural land ( A),
in addition
to a river. The centred areas are dedicated to citizens,
while
the marginal ones are specialised for industrial purposes. The long river comes from a fall near the residential areas
,
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and flows down reaching the industrial areas. The upcoming building might be in any of place mentioned places. Place (A), is mainly composed of manufacturers, where there are a lot of gases emitted daily. Heading east-north comes area (B), where you find apartments that are spread over it, there are three tall architectural destinations distributed over blocks, which are organized and systematic. The forest is located in area (C), particularly right in area (B), where you can find trees only among half of
this
tropical land.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proximity
  • residential area
  • commercial district
  • space constraints
  • costs
  • prime location
  • secluded
  • natural area
  • serene environment
  • remoteness
  • accessibility
  • transport facilities
  • advantageous
  • undisturbed leisure
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