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The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows UK air pollutants, measured in million tonnes, from three different sources between 1990 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the
amount
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 of sources of
air
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pollutants
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 recorded in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2005.
Overall
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 the
amount
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 of total and industrial
air
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pollutants
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 decreased moderately
while
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air
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pollutants
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 provided by households fell slightly from 1990 to 2005. The
amount
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 of
air
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pollutants
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due to
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 households remained relatively stable throughout the
period
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. In 1995, the
amount
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 of total
air
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 pollution was around 7
million
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tonnes
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 and decreased gradually to 4
milllion
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million
tonnes
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 over the next nine years before staying roughly constant at
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 level from 1999 to 2002. After three years, its tonnage dropped modestly to approximately 3
million
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. The
air
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 pollution
resulted
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by
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from
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 industrial
air
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pollutants
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 followed a downward trend over the
period
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, starting at just below 6
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990 and ending at around 2
million
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tonnes
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at the end
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 of the
period
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. The
amount
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 of
air
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pollutants
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resulted
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 by transportation and households was about 3
million
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tonnes
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 in 1990 and the first stayed relatively constant at
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 level through the entire
period
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.
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,
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amount
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decresed
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decreased
decreases
 slowly for the latter year over year and almost depleted in 2005.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, air, pollutants, period, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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