It is impossible to help all people in the world, so governments should focus on people in their own countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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nation only or across the world. Some say that it is not feasible to assist all

population

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populations

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around the world, so the authorities should help only

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their own citizens. I strongly disagree with

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notion because international

aid

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and support should

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in critical

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such

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as

hunger

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and natural

disaster

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.

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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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with, the government should help

to

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other

nations

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when they

must

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need other's support to improve their critical situation.

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is because, some

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nations

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and

under developed

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territories have more population,

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, their

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ratio is increased day-to-day meanwhile the developed nation's help is required.

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, the USA helps to sri Lanka

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people's

hunger

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ratio

by

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financially like they give two million dollars

in

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annually.

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, underdeveloped

nations

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will suffer enormously.

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, international

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is required.

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,

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stable territories support should

require

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to

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third-tier

nations

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. To clarify, natural

disaster

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is affected

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enormously in these

nations

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while

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they

should

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need international

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to progress their hectic situations like

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cyclones

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,

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and flood

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flood

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.

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, India suffered the Mizong flood tremendously and

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effects are more, many people lost their

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meanwhile the UK government provided many basic needs to them to

relief

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this

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situation.

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, one

country

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focuses

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is not the appropriate decision, so, helping

to

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people across the world who

needs

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help is the better choice

to develop

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for developed

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nations

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.

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, international

assist

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is mandatory to help developing and underdeveloped countries

instead

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of focusing on their own

nations

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.

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, I strongly disagree with

this

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statement

due to

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international

aid

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can reduce the

hunger

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rate

as well as

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natural

disaster's

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consequences in developing and

under developed

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underdeveloped

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countries.