More and more people are moving from the countrysie to the city. What are some of the problems this can cause? What solutions can you suggest?

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These days,
people
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migration from
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apply
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village
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villages
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to
the
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metropolitan
places
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are
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is
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increased
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rapidly.
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city
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the city
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has
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having
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better
amenities
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and more employment opportunities.
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, there are some feasible measurements that can diminish
this
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phenomenon.
This
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essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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with, there are some reasons for the country folks migrate to
cities
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. One of the first
cause
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causes
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of
the
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that
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urban locations have better
amenities
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as compared to the
village
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.
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is because,
town
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the town
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not only has the
funfamental
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fundamental
facilities
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but
also
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has recreational
facilities
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,
therefore
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, many local
population
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populations
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like to move
town
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to town
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ro
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to
get all
amenities
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like better education, healthcare and cinema.
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,
the
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in the
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Mumbai state of India, many local residents have immigrated to Mumbai for better
amenities
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. Another reason that
need
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to be considered
cities
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have more employment opportunities than
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village
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villages
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. To clarify, many corporate and multinational enterprises have started their working place in
the
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metropolitan
places
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, and
as a result
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, towns have a plethora of jobs,
hence
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many local citizens move
to
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there.
Nevertheless
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, there are some feasible solutions that can mitigate
this
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trend. A possible solution to
this
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problem would be
the
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authorities should provide all the
facilities
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to the countryside as much as
cities
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, and
as a result
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, migration might be reduced.
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, India has invested plenty of money to modify the villages, the project name
called
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"
modern
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village
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" including all the essential and recreational
facilities
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are included. One immediate practical solution is
to
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for
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big companies and organisations will start
their
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working place in the
village
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in order
to
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for
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local
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the local
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population
also
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will obtain
the
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more employment opportunities in their own
places
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,
hence
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, migration might be diminished.
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, plenty of job chances and better
amenities
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are the main causes for the individuals
are
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migrating to urban venues from their own
places
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.
However
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, there are some feasible solutions that can reduce
this
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phenomenon
such
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as the government should provide all
facilities
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to the villages as much as
cities
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and big companies will start their working locations in the
countrysides
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countryside
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.
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