More and more people are moving from the countrysie to the city. What are some of the problems this can cause? What solutions can you suggest?
These days,
people
migration from Change noun form
people's
the
Correct article usage
apply
Use synonyms
village
to Fix the agreement mistake
villages
the
metropolitan Correct article usage
apply
places
Use synonyms
are
Correct subject-verb agreement
is
increased
rapidly. Wrong verb form
increasing
Due to
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city
Add an article
the city
has
better Wrong verb form
having
amenities
and more employment opportunities. Use synonyms
However
, there are some feasible measurements that can diminish Linking Words
this
phenomenon. Linking Words
This
essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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To begin
with, there are some reasons for the country folks migrate to Linking Words
cities
. One of the first Use synonyms
cause
of Fix the agreement mistake
causes
the
urban locations have better Correct determiner usage
that
amenities
as compared to the Use synonyms
village
. Use synonyms
This
is because, Linking Words
town
not only has the Correct article usage
the town
funfamental
Correct your spelling
fundamental
facilities
but Use synonyms
also
has recreational Linking Words
facilities
, Use synonyms
therefore
, many local Linking Words
population
like to move Change to a plural noun
populations
town
Change preposition
to town
ro
get all Correct your spelling
to
amenities
like better education, healthcare and cinema. Use synonyms
For example
, Linking Words
the
Mumbai state of India, many local residents have immigrated to Mumbai for better Change preposition
in the
amenities
. Another reason that Use synonyms
need
to be considered Change the verb form
needs
cities
have more employment opportunities than Use synonyms
Use synonyms
village
. To clarify, many corporate and multinational enterprises have started their working place in Fix the agreement mistake
villages
the
metropolitan Correct article usage
apply
places
, and Use synonyms
as a result
, towns have a plethora of jobs, Linking Words
hence
many local citizens move Linking Words
to
there.
Change preposition
apply
Nevertheless
, there are some feasible solutions that can mitigate Linking Words
this
trend. A possible solution to Linking Words
this
problem would be Linking Words
the
authorities should provide all the Change preposition
for the
facilities
to the countryside as much as Use synonyms
cities
, and Use synonyms
as a result
, migration might be reduced. Linking Words
For instance
, India has invested plenty of money to modify the villages, the project name Linking Words
called
"Verb problem
is
modern
Correct your spelling
Modern Village
village
" including all the essential and recreational Use synonyms
facilities
are included. One immediate practical solution is Use synonyms
to
big companies and organisations will start Change preposition
for
their
working place in the Correct pronoun usage
apply
village
in order Use synonyms
to
Change preposition
for
local
population Correct article usage
the local
also
will obtain Linking Words
the
more employment opportunities in their own Correct article usage
apply
places
, Use synonyms
hence
, migration might be diminished.
Linking Words
To conclude
, plenty of job chances and better Linking Words
amenities
are the main causes for the individuals Use synonyms
are
migrating to urban venues from their own Unnecessary verb
apply
places
. Use synonyms
However
, there are some feasible solutions that can reduce Linking Words
this
phenomenon Linking Words
such
as the government should provide all Linking Words
facilities
to the villages as much as Use synonyms
cities
and big companies will start their working locations in the Use synonyms
countrysides
.Fix the agreement mistake
countryside
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