Maintaining public libraries is a waste of money since computer technology can replace their functions. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that there is no need to spend money

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public

libraries

since computer technology can do the same work better. From my point of

view

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public

libraries

can offer better opportunities for users.

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computers

have more storage

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lot of functions, which save time for users and have

ability

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to store a huge amount of knowledge, public

libraries

are more reliable and comfortable for users.

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information

in

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computers

can be hacked and changed,

hence

, information in books

are

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more trusted and original.

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there are

also

health problems.

Long term

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use of

computers

can seriously negatively affect people’s health and brain. As an

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scientists argue that

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computer

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computers

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more than 3 hours in day may cause insomnia and

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negatives

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impact

vision

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.

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, public bookstores are very comfortable for book lovers. There are a lot of people who like to touch and feel the book, and reading

same

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book

in

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computer

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a computer

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can not delight them.

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there are some individuals who

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by

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to

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search

information

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for information

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by

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rather than find in

wikipedia

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.

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major part of elderly

peoples

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people

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can not use nowadays technology,

that

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is the reason why

for

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them

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public

libraries

are more reliable.

Furthermore

, public archives especially the old ones ,

consider

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a part of history and have academic and historical value for society.

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instance

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in some

England

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located the biggest

librarie

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libraries

library

with very rare books and tourists prefer to visit and enjoy of beauty

this

bookstore. In conclusion, despite

of

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computers

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large

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a large

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number of functions and data collection, I really believe that public

libraries

are still worth anything to do for it, and disagree with

this

statement.