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Some people say that art is an essential subject and every child should learn it in school. Do you agree or disagree?

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One
 of the conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that
art
 is an essential subject. There is a widespread worry that
this
 will lead to a myriad of concerns in
one
’s life.
However
, I do not entirely accept
this
 and I will explain why in
this
 essay. There are a number of arguments in favour of my stance. The most important
one
 is that
art
 gives pleasure to life and there are numerous other benefits in various
field
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. Thanks to a wide range of advantages it offers, not only
one
 benefit more when it comes to being effective, but they can enhance productivity and quality of their lives, with much more ease, efficacy and convenience. Needless to say, all these merits stand
one
 in good stead, as far as augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned. Another pivotal factor in the above-mentioned proposition is that it is only likely to help
one
 thrive and excel in varied areas.
Besides
, when only
one
 follows
such
 a system, can they broaden their horizons,
thus
 learning
such
 attributes as dedication and perseverance.
Hence
, it is apparent why many are in favour of
art
 subject for every child. In the views of the arguments
outline
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 above,
one
 can conclude that the benefits of
art
 are indeed too great to ignore.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your essay has a clear introductory paragraph stating your main argument, followed by body paragraphs that support your stance with specific reasons and examples. Conclude with a summary that reinforces your viewpoint without introducing new ideas.
task achievement
Your essay should directly respond to the task question by clearly expressing whether you agree or disagree and explaining your opinion with well-supported points. Ensure that each paragraph develops a single main idea that is relevant to your argument and supported by specific, detailed examples.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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