The table shows the percentage of time spent on types of internet activity by age group.

The table shows the percentage of time spent on types of internet activity by age group.
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of the average proportion amount of
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spent online on different activities across
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categories. These include shopping, social networking, browsing news sites, browsing sports sites, and playing games. The bracket consists of those aged from 10 to over 50. In general, the
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differs in what they enjoy doing in their free
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. Every
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uses the internet for social networking, with the
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16-20 years old dedicating half of their
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to it.
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, seniors aged over 50 spend less
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on it.
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, over three-quarters of their
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is spent browsing information on news and sports sites. Compared to the other brackets, those in middle
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around 30-39 spend the longest shopping online over 30% of their
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. The younger
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, particularly those between 10-15 years old devoted almost all their
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to leisure activities, they spend about 70% of their
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playing games and more than 25% on social media. The second demographic that spends the most
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online gaming is young adults (16–20 years old), who account for nearly 21% of all gaming
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. Meanwhile, as they
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, the older
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gradually spend less
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playing games online.

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