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More and more people are using a lot of online language translation apps. Are ther more advantage or more disadvantages of such services.

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Most
people
 often use online
language
translation
apps
 to translate from their origins to a
language
 that they want to translate.
This
 happens because
people
 do not feel confident writing their ideas directly in another
language
 without checking them into a
translation
 app.
Besides
, most of them
also
 do not really master the grammar, so they tend to check it. In
this
 dialogue, I will elaborate on the advantages and disadvantages of using online
language
translation
apps
. As today the technology is really well-developed, online
language
translation
apps
 now have better and more powerful translations, with the accuracy of the correction almost perfect at 100%. Thanks to Artificial Intelligence,
people
 will consider the
apps
 very helpful and instant. They do not need to worry if they write or present their writings in another
language
 wrongly.
However
, where there are advantages, there must be
also
 some risks or disadvantages that
people
 need to control. The simplicity of translating from their origins to another
language
that is
 probably not quite familiar to them will make them look down on the importance of learning a foreign
language
. In conclusion, I consider online
language
translation
apps
 as a powerful tool to help
people
 translate their ideas into another
language
.
Nevertheless
,
people
 still need to have a desire to learn another
language
 on their own.
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